That was extremely interesting to read, unfortunately I found it hard to identify the central conflict and how each character/faction was positioned. Would love to read more of this vision of the Robot Legions!
Right definitely is dropping the reader into the middle of a story. The only time available to me for the submission was between two World Cup games so I focused on having clean writing that allowed others to fill enough of the blanks in but can easily expand at a later time some more exposition. Thanks for reading!
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That was extremely interesting to read, unfortunately I found it hard to identify the central conflict and how each character/faction was positioned. Would love to read more of this vision of the Robot Legions!
Right definitely is dropping the reader into the middle of a story. The only time available to me for the submission was between two World Cup games so I focused on having clean writing that allowed others to fill enough of the blanks in but can easily expand at a later time some more exposition. Thanks for reading!